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Post by Hallowed Be Thy Name on Fri Jul 31, 2015 4:22 pm

Here is my thread: Thrilled Yet? I'll post anything that comes into my mind here.

To start: Here's a story a friend of mine told me years ago when we went camping.

The Hand

Once there was a boy named Jack. He hated his father. His father bossed him, was always sarcastic, and kept criticizing him. Jack couldn't take it any more. Finally, when his father decided to go camping with him and other church members, Jack decided it was time...

Jack and his dad went to get firewood for the campfire. They walked into the woods, and Jack's dad was worse than ever. Finally, as he bent over to pick up some wood, Jack took out a hatchet and chopped his father's head off. Dad didn't know what hit him, for the next moment, his soul had departed and blood was everywhere.

Jack knew that the rest of the campers couldn't be permitted to live, so the unofficial Reaper lured them into the woods one by one and had his dirty deeds done dirt cheap. Finally, only one was left.

Kevin was a nice lad, though a bit slow-minded. He had once fallen out of a 20-story building, and limped because of it. (How he only had a limp from it, I don't know.) A boy named Jack asked him to come to the woods to collect firewood. Kevin had noticed the disappearances, was suspicious, and brought along his knife.

As they walked through the woods, Jack suddenly pulled out a hatchet and attacked. Kevin drew his knife for defense, and ended up stabbing Jack. However, Jack was able to chop Kevin's hand off. Kevin then 'finished the job' and killed Jack, before gruesomely bleeding to death...

20 years later, a boy was using the bathroom at the same place where the Campground Murders were committed. Before he could, a hand hurled out of the toilet, grabbed him, and dragged him down. Nobody saw him again.

The Hand is still said to haunt the campground and take revenge on others for it's decapitation. If you ever go there, watch out...

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Post by Frankthetriviaman on Fri Jul 31, 2015 4:36 pm

Its a well written story; just remember not to take things like that "too far"... Toz said something like that a while back

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Post by Hallowed Be Thy Name on Fri Jul 31, 2015 4:37 pm

I don't understand; what do you mean with "too far"?

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Post by Frankthetriviaman on Sat Aug 01, 2015 9:41 am

I actually don't understand myself; I'm going to have to try and find that post again

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Post by Hallowed Be Thy Name on Sat Aug 01, 2015 9:59 am

OK. But I'm glad you like it!

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Re: Thrilled Yet?

Post by Toz76 on Sat Aug 01, 2015 4:38 pm

I don't recall saying that...

Horror/Thriller isn't my thing, but this was very well written. Keep up the good work!

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Re: Thrilled Yet?

Post by Hallowed Be Thy Name on Sat Aug 01, 2015 4:54 pm

Thank you very much!

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A young paranoid girl... an old creeky house... the darkness under her bed...

Stay tuned next for...

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